Showing posts with label new poetry form. Show all posts
Showing posts with label new poetry form. Show all posts
Jun 15, 2022
Ghazal
The Ghazal (pronounced "ghuzzle") originated in Arabia in the 7th century, evolving from the Qasida, another, much longer, Arabic form. It gained prominence in the 13th and 14th centuries thanks to the Persian poets Rumi and Hafiz. In the eighteenth-century, the ghazal was used by poets writing in Urdu, and was often sung by Iranian, Indian, and Pakistani musicians.
To truly understand the Ghazal, there are a few terms you need to know:
Sher is a rhyming couplet that can stand alone as a poem itself.
Matla’a is the first Sher.
Radif is a repeating word or phrase.
Qaafiyaa is the rhyme scheme.
Maqtaa is the final couplet.
Beher is the syllable count and length of each line.
A traditional Ghazal consists of a collection of Shers, usually seven but you can have anywhere between five and fifteen. The rhyme scheme, or Qaafiyaa is AA BA CA DA, EA, and so forth. The Matla’a sets the tone of the Ghazal, as well as the Radif and Qaafiyaa. The Radif must be included in both lines of the Matla’a. The Maqtaa may contain the poet’s name or signature, but this is left to their discretion. The Beher should be the same throughout.
I found it odd, and a little disappointing, that in the course of my research I found many well-known poets have written what they called Ghazals, but they did not follow the rules. I hope I’ve done a better job of it.
My example:
Wind whispers softly in the trees,
listen, hear the sighing trees.
Autumn changes all the leaves
a forest filled with crying trees.
A slender birch is bent to dance
a wood nymph glorifying trees.
A secret is not safe at all
when told beneath the spying trees.
I see a thousand shades of green
when I look upon the sighing trees.
A sunset paints the mountainside
liming rocks and dyeing trees.
The loggers come and cut their swath
and all around are dying trees.
Note: this Ghazal does not contain a signature in the Maqtaa. :-)
Dec 8, 2017
Blackout Poetry
After a month of sketchy posts, I'm finally back on track. Even if it is just a repeat of the weekly poetry post.
I’ve known about blackout poetry for a few years, but for some reason I never got around to trying it.
When I first considered it for the form of the month I thought it would be really easy, maybe even a little fun. Basically, to do a blackout poem you take a page of prose, pick out a few key words, and then black everything else out.
With the holiday season closing in fast, I decided to use a page from one of my favourite Christmas stories, the Gift of the Magi, by O. Henry. I actually started out with two pages. The first page I used a yellow highlighter to highlight words that caught my eye. Then I reversed it on the second page, blacking out everything but the words I highlighted on the first page. And this is what I came up with:
It wasn’t as easy as I thought it would be, especially the blacking out part. I went through seven copies before I got it right. LOL
Meanwhile, here’s another couple of examples of what you can do with blackout poetry:
Smore - Blackout Poetry Challenge
Scholastic Blackout Poetry
For more examples and a better explanation, check these links:
Power Poetry - 5 Tips For Creating Blackout Poetry
Medium - Creative Deconstruction For Writers: How to Write a Blackout Poem
I’ve known about blackout poetry for a few years, but for some reason I never got around to trying it.
When I first considered it for the form of the month I thought it would be really easy, maybe even a little fun. Basically, to do a blackout poem you take a page of prose, pick out a few key words, and then black everything else out.
With the holiday season closing in fast, I decided to use a page from one of my favourite Christmas stories, the Gift of the Magi, by O. Henry. I actually started out with two pages. The first page I used a yellow highlighter to highlight words that caught my eye. Then I reversed it on the second page, blacking out everything but the words I highlighted on the first page. And this is what I came up with:
It wasn’t as easy as I thought it would be, especially the blacking out part. I went through seven copies before I got it right. LOL
Meanwhile, here’s another couple of examples of what you can do with blackout poetry:
Smore - Blackout Poetry Challenge
Scholastic Blackout Poetry
For more examples and a better explanation, check these links:
Power Poetry - 5 Tips For Creating Blackout Poetry
Medium - Creative Deconstruction For Writers: How to Write a Blackout Poem
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