Showing posts with label Kimo. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Kimo. Show all posts

Mar 31, 2011

Kimo Verse Form

The Kimo verse was developed in Israel. This post-Haiku poetic form evolved from the need for more than 5, 7, and 5 syllables to create a Haiku in Hebrew. It consists of three lines of 10, 7, and 6 syllables.

Schematic:
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Kimo usually describes one frozen scene that has no movement in it. Rhyme not necessary. Give Kimo a try. Stretch your poetic Haiku legs a bit and explore this lesser known poetic form.

My examples are a little on the dark side, but that’s just the way it goes sometimes.


Mind encased in a cage stronger than steel
The bars made by unwanted thoughts
No escape in sight

~ * ~ ~ * ~ ~ * ~

When darkness falls it’s a welcome relief
The daylight makes it too hard
To keep up the pretence

~ * ~ ~ * ~ ~ * ~

Standing on the edge of the soul’s abyss
Unable to see forward
The light fades to darkness